i find the sysba/'ynmar comment in chapter 3 by Pariah to be odd, only because your sex doesnt = your pronouns. otherwise, i am super enjoying the game so far
I actually think this case is special, because if they're a shapeshifter, sysba absolutely can just *snap* and bam, their sex aligns with their pronouns.
I'm in love with this demo, especially Sysba and Dreamwalker! I have a question though, does the dream you get is in random or there's something that triggers it? What I go so far is the one at the ocean, the carnival and the hotel, are there more??
Hi! Thank you for your kind words! The dream is triggered depending on the word you click :) so 'What' will lead to one dream, 'Dream', will lead to another dream, and so on! There's a cabin in the woods, the ocean, the carnival, and the hotel!
There's 9 songs that play with all of them seemingly being slowed and pitched down. I can't tell if some of them are covers and/or remixes so I apologize for that.
1. Shot It - KVPV
2. Love Lockdown - Kanye West
3. BALENCIAGA - kad1r
4. Treat Me Like A Slut - Kim Petras
5. Couldn't figure it out, sorry (Starts at 15: 38)
The missing song is Do It by TRFN! Love Lockdown was a cover by One True God, and Toxic was covered by Besomorph! Thanks GalacticSinner for covering the bulk—it looks like I missed the initial comment :( apologies!
So, I'm on Operator's route and I'm in The Labyrinth. I'm stuck on the riddle: "What's black, white and red all over?" It's a newspaper. I've put them in the input field multiple times. I've tried a newspaper, A Newspaper, newspaper, Newspaper, etc.. and still it keeps going back to the buzzing and stating that it's not correct. That's the answer to the riddle.... HALP!
Finished the demo on Sysba's route- AMAZING! The plot summary alone made me want to play, but once I saw we could romance an eldritch god I was SOLD. Brilliant worldbuilding, loved your sense of humor, appreciated the Mean Girls reference 😉 My only complaint right now is the (occasional) long transitions.
Will other characters get art like Gasper? It was cool and I liked the way you implemented it where the snake is, but I was a little confused since he's just a side character (so far?).
Hi! Technically, it's already kind of started once you finish the dream sequences! However, you'll see more of him (in a sense) come chapter 6. Thank you!!!
Great game but I have one complaint. I'm not able to save manually, every time I try to I get an error message. Has anyone else had this problem? Of so is anyone able to help me?
Hello! Thank you for the compliment! I'm sorry you're having difficulties with your saves. Depending on the browser you're using, you may need to clear cache and see if that works, or test the game on another browser!
Hi! The original commentor might be referring to the itch.io application. You can download and run the game that way, but saves are broken for me, too, if I do. I imagine there IS a fix, since I've played quite a bit of IF through the itch app without issue, but I'm not sure what it is. Sorry for not having a better idea about what to do, but I hope letting you know might help a little bit? Either way, love the story!!
Hi! Love the game so far (currently crushing on gasper a bit)
Might I suggest the ability to turn the glitchy text off (like when deadlock talks to you in your head)? From an accessibility standpoint (for me personally, can't say for anyone else) it's kinda hard on the eyes and gives a slight headache.
Other than that, this story is very captivating and I'm looking forward to seeing more!
I just finished a play-through and my god I am so invested! Midway through the play-through I was invested enough to sketch my MC. I love all the details, the little memory work required, the fairytale, the foreshadowing. I also like how the development of the story and relationships don’t feel rushed at all.
Thank you for creating this world and letting us meet these characters! Best of luck for the rest of development ^^
I only noticed a few typographical errors. Also, I’m not sure if it’s a bug but right after unlocking Suha in relationships, she disappears from the list again until the end of the game.
The amount of content and development is great. I started playing this a couple of weeks back and have slipped back in on my time off.
My two main complaints are similar.
I don't like how often the default (only) response is awkward, self-deprecating humor MC. I'd much rather play my MC as self-assured, but he is often forced into the "loveable goofball" scenes.
I also wish my job choice of Doctor seemed to have any actual purpose. I spent time reviewing the options in my head before selecting one for my MC, and it doesn't seem like my choice has mattered.
The story, world, and NPCs are all amazing. I just wish my MC felt like more MY MC.
Regarding the complaints, I'm not too sure if you've been on the dev blog or not, but I do emphasize that the career choice is most valuable come chapter 6. There is flavor text existing throughout the game right now for your career, but because of the way the story is it just hasn't had a chance to shine right now. It's a very slow moving story 😅
Your other point about the MC has been mentioned by others and is something I'm trying to take into consideration for future updates.
Oh awesome! I'm going through now and doing what I think my MC would do, but later on I'd like to go through and see all other options as well and what decisions lead to where. Lol
My only gripe is that some transitions seem bit too long. Like the Dreamwalker introduction, unless i missed something, you couldn't skip the glitchy messages.
Hi! Thanks for your kind words! I'm working on trying to find the right pacing for transitions, but unfortunately I also need to take into account that people may have different reading speeds, so I can't make things too fast. Once I figure out a good speed it should be more workable :)
I'M SUPREMELY, SWOONINGLY, VERILY SATISFIED WITH THE UPDATE!! Thank youu thank youuu!!! Can't stop smiling, and this is just what i need after a hard day
It's not letting me open the settings for some reason so I can't save or check my character thing which is a shame because I don't really want to end up having to delete everything since I'm so far into the story right now
Hello! I'm sorry you're experiencing these difficulties. Unfortunately, my only advice to you regarding this concern is to clear cache and see if that fixes the issue. It'll force you to restart, but hopefully you won't run into the issue after that. Again, I'm incredibly sorry, and let me know if it still doesn't run!
The story is really good so far! Do you think you could add Deadlock to the list of r/o, dunno why my brain just attached to him. I really like the writing and how the characters interact!
Thank you for your kind words! Unfortunately there will be no more RO's beyond the 6 listed, simply because it would not be feasible for me to adjust the plot that I have made for that change. I have all 3 books worked out so far, and it would be too much of a hassle to readjust them for anyone else. Cheers!
Hello! What browser are you using to play?? I checked on both mobile chrome and PC chrome and found that the saves work fine on my end; if it continues to persist for you, clearing cookies should fix the problem! Let me know if this still doesn't work!
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I gasped when Gasper popped up randomly on my screen (pun unintended). HE'S SO FIINNEEEEE
Edit: “Grab your stuff and come with me.” had me flailing my hands around and snorting like a little pig, it's not even funny 💀
i find the sysba/'ynmar comment in chapter 3 by Pariah to be odd, only because your sex doesnt = your pronouns. otherwise, i am super enjoying the game so far
I actually think this case is special, because if they're a shapeshifter, sysba absolutely can just *snap* and bam, their sex aligns with their pronouns.
deadlock cute as hell
I'm in love with this demo, especially Sysba and Dreamwalker! I have a question though, does the dream you get is in random or there's something that triggers it? What I go so far is the one at the ocean, the carnival and the hotel, are there more??
Hi! Thank you for your kind words! The dream is triggered depending on the word you click :) so 'What' will lead to one dream, 'Dream', will lead to another dream, and so on! There's a cabin in the woods, the ocean, the carnival, and the hotel!
omg thank you!
The music in the club was atmospheric and I really liked it.Does anyone know the songs that were played there?
There's 9 songs that play with all of them seemingly being slowed and pitched down. I can't tell if some of them are covers and/or remixes so I apologize for that.
1. Shot It - KVPV
2. Love Lockdown - Kanye West
3. BALENCIAGA - kad1r
4. Treat Me Like A Slut - Kim Petras
5. Couldn't figure it out, sorry (Starts at 15: 38)
6. Cherry Cola - Lucky Luke & Gaullin
7. I See U - One True God
8. Toxic - Brittany Spears
9. THE SNAKE - Lana Luban
OMG, thank you sunshine <3
The missing song is Do It by TRFN! Love Lockdown was a cover by One True God, and Toxic was covered by Besomorph! Thanks GalacticSinner for covering the bulk—it looks like I missed the initial comment :( apologies!
this is awesome! Obviously there was MUCH work and thought put into this project, and all us readers certainly enjoy it!!
So, I'm on Operator's route and I'm in The Labyrinth. I'm stuck on the riddle: "What's black, white and red all over?" It's a newspaper. I've put them in the input field multiple times. I've tried a newspaper, A Newspaper, newspaper, Newspaper, etc.. and still it keeps going back to the buzzing and stating that it's not correct. That's the answer to the riddle.... HALP!
It's case sensitive! The answer should just be:
Newspaper
No comma or quotations!
Hrmmm, I'm pretty sure I did that as well. But I will try it again! :)
Maybe my PC hates me. Hahahhaa. It's working now.
I'm glad it worked out in the end!!
Is the demo not gonna be updated like on patreon ? ^^"
The demo has been updated! :) ops route is up to play!
The save I did lead me to the end of the demo, do I have to restart ? :3
The demo does end at the end of Operator's route, so if you did not get access to his route, you may need to restart!
Finished the demo on Sysba's route- AMAZING! The plot summary alone made me want to play, but once I saw we could romance an eldritch god I was SOLD. Brilliant worldbuilding, loved your sense of humor, appreciated the Mean Girls reference 😉 My only complaint right now is the (occasional) long transitions.
Will other characters get art like Gasper? It was cool and I liked the way you implemented it where the snake is, but I was a little confused since he's just a side character (so far?).
The intention is to get art of other characters (RO's, Abyssal, Helios, Deadlock, etc) who will be key players :) thank you for all your kind words!!
Are gasper and deadlock really not romancable? Feels like a huge missed opportunity...plently of established chemistry
Gasper shows up for a quarter of a chapter?
Hey sorry no disrespect to you! Loved the game, sorry if that came across wrong
Hi I'm wondering when Dreamwalker's path will come into play ?
Other than that, i love the game! especially Sysba (really having a hard time choosing between him and DW)
ps: deadlock is ADORABLE
Hi! Technically, it's already kind of started once you finish the dream sequences! However, you'll see more of him (in a sense) come chapter 6. Thank you!!!
Good game!! Though question, did anyone else have Suha's name gone as soon as the "Slice and Paradise" starts?
me too
Great game but I have one complaint. I'm not able to save manually, every time I try to I get an error message. Has anyone else had this problem? Of so is anyone able to help me?
Hello! Thank you for the compliment! I'm sorry you're having difficulties with your saves. Depending on the browser you're using, you may need to clear cache and see if that works, or test the game on another browser!
Hopefully it clears up!
Hi! The original commentor might be referring to the itch.io application. You can download and run the game that way, but saves are broken for me, too, if I do. I imagine there IS a fix, since I've played quite a bit of IF through the itch app without issue, but I'm not sure what it is. Sorry for not having a better idea about what to do, but I hope letting you know might help a little bit? Either way, love the story!!
oh wow this is lovely and i really want to have a date with gasper after the curb stomping since he is greener than men i know in real life •//~//•
ha ha can i be pinned on the wall by gasper romantically?????? ^//O//^/ /jk (maybe)
oh dear 💀
Hi! Love the game so far (currently crushing on gasper a bit)
Might I suggest the ability to turn the glitchy text off (like when deadlock talks to you in your head)? From an accessibility standpoint (for me personally, can't say for anyone else) it's kinda hard on the eyes and gives a slight headache.
Other than that, this story is very captivating and I'm looking forward to seeing more!
Hello! Thank you for your kind words!!
I'll definitely see if there's a way I can have an option to turn the text off so it won't cause any further issues!!
aaaagh i'm trying to get dreamwalker as my ro and he barely shows up until the end- babe i'm trying to ROMANCE HIM THAT STUPID SUCKER 🥺💔😊
no complaints though!!! this is phenomenal!!!
also gasper and deadlock should totally be able to be romanced ❤️❤️❤️
Unfortunately they aren't romanceable, but you can in your heart.
nooo sad!!! oh well, time to set my sights on somebody else!! :)))
Isn't Dreamwalker on the RO list up there?
that's what i thought, but i don't know?? maybe he's one of the lesser ro's?? we'll just have to see in the next update
I meant both Deadlock and Gasper aren't romanceable. Dreamwalker is.
SO UR TELLING ME GASPER ISN'T AN RP☹️
IM LITERALLY OBSESSED WITH THIS GAME
I just finished a play-through and my god I am so invested! Midway through the play-through I was invested enough to sketch my MC. I love all the details, the little memory work required, the fairytale, the foreshadowing. I also like how the development of the story and relationships don’t feel rushed at all.
Thank you for creating this world and letting us meet these characters! Best of luck for the rest of development ^^
I only noticed a few typographical errors. Also, I’m not sure if it’s a bug but right after unlocking Suha in relationships, she disappears from the list again until the end of the game.
The amount of content and development is great. I started playing this a couple of weeks back and have slipped back in on my time off.
My two main complaints are similar.
I don't like how often the default (only) response is awkward, self-deprecating humor MC. I'd much rather play my MC as self-assured, but he is often forced into the "loveable goofball" scenes.
I also wish my job choice of Doctor seemed to have any actual purpose. I spent time reviewing the options in my head before selecting one for my MC, and it doesn't seem like my choice has mattered.
The story, world, and NPCs are all amazing. I just wish my MC felt like more MY MC.
Hello! Thanks for your comment!
Regarding the complaints, I'm not too sure if you've been on the dev blog or not, but I do emphasize that the career choice is most valuable come chapter 6. There is flavor text existing throughout the game right now for your career, but because of the way the story is it just hasn't had a chance to shine right now. It's a very slow moving story 😅
Your other point about the MC has been mentioned by others and is something I'm trying to take into consideration for future updates.
Hope that helps, and thank you again!
i have such a crush on deadlock even if we annoy him 🥺 all the characters are sooooo good, most books tend to focus development only on the ROs
Welp time to choose between two of my favorite love interest
Thank you for the update author, been waiting for so long even in dashing.com. 😍😍😍
I've re-read this again and found how much i love every cast member. They're all captivating and unique in their own way
Really love this game! I'm only on chapter 3 right now and I'm so conflicted on what the mc should do.
Will you by chance ever have a walkthrough made for this?
Hi! Once the book is finished I will!
Cheers!!
Oh awesome! I'm going through now and doing what I think my MC would do, but later on I'd like to go through and see all other options as well and what decisions lead to where. Lol
Very good game, wish it could be the full version! But a person can dream.
Good luck with the development!
This story had me by the throat. I could hardly bear to step away. I felt genuine terror during Dreamwalker’s lovely appearance. Very well written.
Do you plan on a Poly route?
Hi! Yes, with Sysba and DW, but it won't be implemented until the end of book 2!
Ok. Can't Wait!
oops!!!!!! i now have a thing for eldritch gods. thanks sysba.
count me in <3
Wonderful game so far. Can't wait for more!
My only gripe is that some transitions seem bit too long. Like the Dreamwalker introduction, unless i missed something, you couldn't skip the glitchy messages.
Hi! Thanks for your kind words! I'm working on trying to find the right pacing for transitions, but unfortunately I also need to take into account that people may have different reading speeds, so I can't make things too fast. Once I figure out a good speed it should be more workable :)
i love reading thru these RO descriptions and theyre all cool apocalyptic survivor types and then its just "eldritch god"
I'M SUPREMELY, SWOONINGLY, VERILY SATISFIED WITH THE UPDATE!! Thank youu thank youuu!!! Can't stop smiling, and this is just what i need after a hard day
sooo excited ;3
It's not letting me open the settings for some reason so I can't save or check my character thing which is a shame because I don't really want to end up having to delete everything since I'm so far into the story right now
Hello! I'm sorry you're experiencing these difficulties. Unfortunately, my only advice to you regarding this concern is to clear cache and see if that fixes the issue. It'll force you to restart, but hopefully you won't run into the issue after that. Again, I'm incredibly sorry, and let me know if it still doesn't run!
love it so much ,every character is so interesting and also everyting about the enviroment of the world , cant wait for the next update
The story is really good so far! Do you think you could add Deadlock to the list of r/o, dunno why my brain just attached to him. I really like the writing and how the characters interact!
Thank you for your kind words! Unfortunately there will be no more RO's beyond the 6 listed, simply because it would not be feasible for me to adjust the plot that I have made for that change. I have all 3 books worked out so far, and it would be too much of a hassle to readjust them for anyone else. Cheers!
Just started playing but I can't save. Every time I try to save, I get an error. Autosaves work fine, though.
Hello! What browser are you using to play?? I checked on both mobile chrome and PC chrome and found that the saves work fine on my end; if it continues to persist for you, clearing cookies should fix the problem! Let me know if this still doesn't work!
13/10 story; 6/10 candy choice ; All in all 11/10 game
This have been one of my favourite book in choice of games, seems like you move here author 😍😍😍. I hope you will keep writing this book .
This is SO GOOD OMG!
A masterpiece!!
I love the length of each chapters!!
Can't wait for more ;_;